I really liked your facts they were very interesting. Your pictures were great and very cool. The only thing that was wrong was that when you started to talk about donating blood your voice got low. Other than that it was really good and nice music for the credits(: 98/100
Thanks Alicia, and yea I have a weak stomach so talking about blood would probably be a bit lower but I should have paid more attention to my voice volume! Thanks for your input, I realle appreciate it :)
I thought your intro was good and the facts were cool. I have to agree with Alicia though about how your voice got very low in a few spots. But everything else you needed was there so 98/100
Thanks for taking the time to listen to my video (even if it was for a grade). And, like I said to Alicia, I should have paid more attention to my voice volume. :) thanks for the feedback!
I really liked it. I enjoyed your topics, but in some spots like number 7 and 10 especially were hard to hear. In some spots, your "P's and B's" were hard to hear because they popped in the microphone, but that's less your fault than it is the microphone. I enjoyed the music to your credits and I'd give it a 98/100.
You had a very good intro. And all of your pictures went with what you where talking about, and you had a lot of good specific facts on why you wanted to do the things you picked. You didn't have any music though... but when the credits came you did! It was very good. Rate: 95/100
Great job with your digital story. I absolutely loved it. You sounded excited about doing things on your list. Most of your recordings were excellent. A few were low in volume. Your mom’s lucky to have a daughter like you who enjoys spending time with her. I wasn’t lucky enough to have a daughter but I have a wonderful daughter-in-law. Wonderful job with pictures and putting this all together, on YouTube, etc. You also did a nice job with work cited and music. One of the best! 98/100
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your facts they were very interesting. Your pictures were great and very cool. The only thing that was wrong was that when you started to talk about donating blood your voice got low. Other than that it was really good and nice music for the credits(: 98/100
ReplyDeleteThanks Alicia, and yea I have a weak stomach so talking about blood would probably be a bit lower but I should have paid more attention to my voice volume! Thanks for your input, I realle appreciate it :)
DeleteI thought your intro was good and the facts were cool. I have to agree with Alicia though about how your voice got very low in a few spots. But everything else you needed was there so 98/100
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking the time to listen to my video (even if it was for a grade). And, like I said to Alicia, I should have paid more attention to my voice volume. :) thanks for the feedback!
DeleteI really liked it. I enjoyed your topics, but in some spots like number 7 and 10 especially were hard to hear. In some spots, your "P's and B's" were hard to hear because they popped in the microphone, but that's less your fault than it is the microphone. I enjoyed the music to your credits and I'd give it a 98/100.
ReplyDeleteYou had a very good intro. And all of your pictures went with what you where talking about, and you had a lot of good specific facts on why you wanted to do the things you picked. You didn't have any music though... but when the credits came you did! It was very good. Rate: 95/100
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your digital story. I absolutely loved it. You sounded excited about doing things on your list. Most of your recordings were excellent. A few were low in volume. Your mom’s lucky to have a daughter like you who enjoys spending time with her. I wasn’t lucky enough to have a daughter but I have a wonderful daughter-in-law. Wonderful job with pictures and putting this all together, on YouTube, etc. You also did a nice job with work cited and music.
ReplyDeleteOne of the best! 98/100